Ours Poem by Neela Nath Das

Ours

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We play with hours' soul,
and make feel other happy.
Actually, we ride on the horse
of time to reach near another fake point.
Satisfaction is a minitue's sojourn
Thousand drops can't fill
the quench of a thirsty sea.
And ours is the mirage world
with the playing of rays
of light in the oceaneous land.

Wednesday, October 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 27 October 2014

Thousand drops can't fill The quench of a thirsty sea But one drop of love Can fill our heart for ever- nice penning

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 October 2014

Wow.....Beautiful flow like ocean. Very true said, we run behind mirages and run to reach fake point. Thoughtful write... Loved it.

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Leloudia Migdali 23 October 2014

Yes! A very nice poem and so deep!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 October 2014

As deep as ocean- Actually, we ride on the horse of time to reach near another fake point. superb thank you

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