Our World Poem by Just Myself

Our World



The world as I see it
Is a spinning catastrophe.
Violence
Death
Poverty
All together,
It collapses.
We plummet to
War.

The world as I see it
Smiles.
But cries of broken hearts
Loss of hope,
Loss of dreams,
An empty future
Both yours and mine
Our world
Is dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This is so sad, but so true. I'm glad you don't stand for what this world has come to. I don't either. Keep writing, and keep standing up for what you know is right. You should read my poem, The World We Live In, it pretty much has the same theme as your poem.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 February 2010

Our world is dying but there is still hope if we will promote unity and not mutiny. nice job!

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