! ! Our Sun Reveals Poem by Bob Blackwell

! ! Our Sun Reveals

Rating: 4.9


Shades of life return,
as our sun, brush paints
a landscape of love,
to brighten up our globe.

Sun mottled colours,
the energy of being,
form a palette of life,
to illuminate our world.

Nature made clear, the
fruits of field and forest,
give knowledge of path
to our enlightenment.


06-06-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diana Van Den Berg 07 June 2009

Now, if everyone in the world read this poem, what peace and understanding and love it would bring.

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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

If we ponder our vision around, Nature has made several objects that trigger us in certain ways. It is just the sluggishness of human mind that fails to conceive the motivating features around. The imagery is just perfect in describing the peculiarities of love, motivation and a pragmatic way forwards.......10/10

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Bob Gibson 07 June 2009

The warmth of the sun matches the warmth in your heart Bob! wonderful poem regards Bob

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Fay Slimm 07 June 2009

Mottled colours are an ideal way of description of sun at times Bob and this piece is filled with bright aspects of the blessings the sun bestows... many thanks for sharing.... love Fay....10/10

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Alf Hutchison 07 June 2009

Bob..I read EVENING first and said there that you are unique... and I reiterate there is only one Bob Blackwell...you have the most wonderful nature and it reflects in your heartfelt poetry.. Thank you for sharing and helping me...best regards Alf

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Yelena M. 05 September 2009

Bob, one of my favourite poems of yours. Inspiring lines of how the sun forms a palette of life illuminating the universe. Thanks for sharing very much and best wishes to you. Yelena M.

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Sandra Fowler 19 June 2009

I love to think of the sun painting.Your poem is filled with light. As always, Sandra

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Vidi Writes 15 June 2009

This poem is an open call to all Come out from those daily deal of juggles There is so much to learn from nature. Catch those revealing pearls If captured inside, nothing can be seen. Good one. Enjoyed the theme. Thank you.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2009

Yes; Sun reveals...but it seems humans have only eyes and no visions proper... beautiful awareness poem Bob..the economy of words there in conveying your message is really admirable...thanks...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 June 2009

'Nature made clear, the fruits of field and forest, give knowledge of path to our enlightenment.' you know sir, i just returned from a complicated lecture...and read this one..just relaxed my mind....filled me with great contentment....nice refreshment indeed...enjoyed it as if i m drinking Mango nectar..thank you for this one...10++ regards shan

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