Julie Smith

Gold Star - 4,632 Points (21st March)

Our Song - Poem by Julie Smith

Summertime's ending but winter is far
Passing the time at the cinema
Sun, swimming pool and buying new clothes
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Topic(s) of this poem: beginning, boyfriend, first love, fun, love, love and friendship, secret, singing, song, summer

Form: Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is the poem I love the most because it describes how everything began, last summer, the most beautiful, magical time... Can't believe it's been a year. One night I was listening to Taylor Swift's song 'Our Song' and I was crying because everything was so beautiful... It will never be as innocent and sweet as that... Thank you month of August <3

Comments about Our Song by Julie Smith

  • Paul Amrod (8/3/2016 3:30:00 PM)


    Hi Julie Enjoy the way your words flow. I am American, may I ask what your English heritage is? Greetings, Paul (Report) Reply

    Julie Smith Julie Smith (8/3/2016 5:47:00 PM)

    Thank you Paul. I'm German but I always write in English, it feels so natural to me, thanks again :)

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  • Paul Amrod (8/1/2016 5:09:00 PM)


    Hi Julie This would be a very cool lyric. The tune could be funky or hip-hoppy even. Check out some young good musicians and show this very creative poem to him or her. Greetings, Paul (Report) Reply

    Julie Smith Julie Smith (8/3/2016 8:00:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot Paul :) I'll do that








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