Our Own Personal War Poem by Maryam Khan

Our Own Personal War

Rating: 5.0


This world we live in is an up hill struggle,
Everyday we live with our guilt,
Our heads full of anxiety,
All the time we have our own personal wars,

We pass many people on the street,
Not even to give them a thought,
Never to see them again,
Never to pass them again,

As we stand in the crowd full of people,
We stop to only notice,
That the world is passing by our very own eyes,
Faster than we can keep up,

We can not control much,
We can not make our own future,
We can not see what will happen next,
All we can do is hope,
All we can do is keep faith in what we believe in,

This is known as our own personal war,
If only something or someone could make it easier,
We have to fight for our own way in life,
But somehow someway you will find your way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 13 April 2009

Yes friend war it is more often personal and peace......... it is always mutual 10

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 January 2009

' every one is fighting a great war' mother tressa said, , , , yes we have so many wars and personal war, , love i believe in the end prevails, , , so well wrtten maryam, , thanx for sharing, ,10

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very butifully penned.....clean observation of personal thoughts....

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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

Yes, you are right. We will find our own way when the time comes. This is amazing, Maryam! I totally love it! Keep up the good work.

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Joseph Poewhit 29 December 2008

I'm with you, step by step it seems.

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