Our Love Has Burnt Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)

Our Love Has Burnt

Rating: 5.0


How on earth
Was I suppose to know
That our birth
Was a friendship to blow

We did all in the bright
With light gliding our joyful nights
And our love at that time was undone
but we kept on seeing the shining sun

Lies we tried to banish
Secrets with hoped to vanish
But ours kept being strong
The love we had kept being long

But how on earth
Did we see the end
that now the length
Of our love has burnt?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 23 June 2012

How on earth Was I suppose to know That our birth Was a friendship to blow a glance at the words flow is pure of joy for instance thy see below a heart not ink

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Neela Nath Das 23 June 2012

The theme of love is expressed in a new light.Love burns, its length reduces.Anele, so superb this poem is! I simply loved it.10 will be less!

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

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South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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