Our Love Burns In Me Poem by Pablo Loves Life

Our Love Burns In Me

Rating: 5.0


The walls of this room is too close
It’s pressing down on me
like my lonely heart
and my empty bed
because you aren’t there beside me
The silence is like a loud shriek
which no one hears
Ever hears...
Even my heartbeat is slow and loud
forcing my breath over my lips
because your not here
Does anyone understand, understand you are not with me!
I could hear the tears in my loneliness
could hear them splatter on the ground
confirming what I know
You are not here with me...
Could anyone break this silence?
So that I could hide these feelings
My God...
I don’t understand this love
it’s burning in my heart
in my soul
leaving me bare like the veldt after a fire
This fire is raging within me
calling to you
to make love to me
to wrap your arms round me
Dig your nails deep into me
leave a scar which I could treasure in moments like these
that I may relive the physical longing for you
that I may run my finger over the scar
recalling the memory when you marked me
remembering our closeness
Do you understand?
Understand that I love you so deeply
warm tears flow freely
joining yours
because you phoned
confirmed your love for me
Giving me hope
Shattering the silence round me
while I carry you in my heart
I carry you there
So that no one can see
my love for you
my longing for you
except my God

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 14 January 2008

Very real pain felt in this write. I understand that pain, it resonates deeply, the line about the scar is understandable too, I hope you get through this pain Pablo, it's a beautifully poignant write. HG: -) xx

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Suicide King 14 January 2008

a very moving piece of poetry...very good, very good...thank you for this art.

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