Our Love Poem by Amber McCalment

Our Love

Rating: 5.0


he kisses my forehead,
tells me he loves me.
then takes a deep breath
and looks me in the eyes.

its all about her,
no matter what i do,
i see it in his eyes,
he loves her too.

with a sharp pain in my chest,
i turn away,
he don't need to see me cry,
he don't need to see my pain.

i shutter with the fear of losing him,
and cry with the words he says,
he stops talking to me,
and walks away with a deep breath.

i beg for his forgiveness,
for being selfish and dumb,
but when he talks to her,
my feelings go numb.

the pain is high,
and the love is tucked away,
my mind goes wild,
thinking its the last day.

the last day ill love him,
for he no longer wants me,
that's all i can think about,
that's all i can see.

i think to myself,
i've finally destroyed us,
i let jealousy come in.
and shadow our love.

Thursday, May 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
his is about me and my current boyfriend and the fight we had recently about his ex and him being friends with her.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soul Watcher 04 June 2016

This is the pure love that I like to read about thank you for sharing Amber Didn't you write other poems?

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Terry Craddock 18 September 2015

Had to return, your poem was so endearing I need to vote 10 :)

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Kelly Kurt 18 September 2015

Millions of stories, all of them individual but with the same undercurrents. Writing is a good way to not only explore your feelings, but expunge some anxiety. Keep writing Peace

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Terry Craddock 18 September 2015

beautifully painful tender verse, the recurrent story of youth and love personilized

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Amber McCalment

Amber McCalment

Lafayette, IN
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