Our Love Poem by Valsa George
Our Love
Our love is infinite as the sky
On love’s filmy wings we soar high
It has the might of a mountain
And the upward thrust of a fountain
Our love soars like swift birds in flight
With the boon of newer vistas in sight
It is like the sweet lays of a song
All through life, its rhythmic notes do ring
Our love renews itself like the rising sun
Each day in golden flame, it does burn
It is like the life sustaining breath
That shall keep us alive until our death
Our love, hopefully will remain sublime
As a living monument in Time
Even after the sun of our life sets
In heaven we shall sing love’s duets
Love is definitely infinite like sky and can not be measured. Love is like rising sun and shines as well as brings unlimited courage. Love is the living monument of time that we remember always and Love takes us towards DIVINE. Very wonderfully drafted such a beautiful love poem.
On the occasion of Holi, you have very beautifully coloured your canvas of love. Beautiful write.
A fabulous poem on love dear madam! Loved reading it....5 stars.
The Distinguishing point in your poem is that you are using a brilliant poetic language far away from daily speech, as we notice that you use metaphors, and other rhetoric devices to employ images from the universe into your poetry works, and this may give them a strength and creativity and elegance.
Our love soars like swift birds in flight With the boon of newer vistas in sight It is like the sweet lays of a song All through life, its rhythmic notes do ring
Many poets wrote about love, but this poetry is completely different from the majority, well done 10/10 and to my favourite list.
Our love is infinite as the sky On love’s filmy wings we soar high It has the might of a mountain And the upward thrust of a fountain
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 11:34:19 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A beautiful poem on love...........................