Our Life Purpose Poem by Vanessa Hughes

Our Life Purpose

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People talk about a purpose
A mission for each one on earth
A path that if you choose to walk it
Was pre-determined before your birth

A mission testing your every being
Mostly based on facing fear
And if you opt to walk away
Repeated chances will appear

With every challenge that awaits us
Comes a lesson to help us grow
Walk away or accept your fate
Your higher purpose is there to know

And as I walk a path that's hurt me
And sometimes cut me up inside
I won't back off from what life throws me
I'll hold on tight and enjoy the ride.

Friday, December 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sina Farajzadeh 16 December 2014

Hi. Yea so many talk about a purpose. But what's that? Is there any? No one's sure. We just hear such things from movies or superstitious people I guess. The mission is being itself. Being - existence... If this path is predetermined then I have no choice and I cannot help change my fate, right? Chance? Is not lucky every being on this planet... With every challenge we face come a lesson. It is our doom. Being miserable. The lesson teaches us to bear life though it is not satisfactory. Why should I tolerate this life which I was forced to come. I did not choose to be born, and yet I was born. And now I have to bear this misery of BEINNG! To tolerate this life one should be flexible. Sometimes you have to back off. It is not optional. I din't mean to attack or censure your writing. It is what I generally think about life. I'd be glad to know your ideas about my works. Have a good time..

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2019

nice 'story' and rhyming. it is life and other things which fear me.....at times! i fear NOTHING! MOMMY! ! ! ! Vanessa hit me! ! ! bri " ;) to MyPoemList and into April showcase soon, in my list of P H poems. thanks.

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Kelly Kurt 23 August 2015

Only a wise, experienced human could have written this wonderful piece.

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Jak Black 12 August 2015

A lovely poem, Vanessa. Great rhythm, great rhyming. I like the message contained herein, courage and determination to see it through. Well done.

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Valerie Dohren 27 January 2015

Interesting concept - a very well written poem.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 18 December 2014

I won't back off from what life throws me I'll hold on tight and enjoy the ride. A beautiful poem on realistic attitude towards life.Well expressed.I really enjoyed it. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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