...Our First Gig by David DeSantis

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...Our First Gig

Groggily lurching
towards
a snail's pace
forray,

you've been a disaster
but never like this.

last nights debut
a triumph of sound,

You rocked
You rolled
and perhaps a bit much

Common Sense
and Sunday
the two should mix well

have a drink,
have another
ease the nerves
celebration
ease the nerves
drink it up
stop at 12
slip at 1
on at 2..
3 at
bed.

Now
I can't even focus
on writing this poem,

but its all i can do
from a head on a desk.

Copyright (C) David DeSantis

David DeSantis

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Frank Cannon (8/3/2008 3:50:00 AM)
Sunday is a poor apology for what's coming next - Monday - and an opportunity to try and remember what went before - Saturday nights gruesomely wild gig! ! Sláinte.

Craig Anderson (7/31/2008 6:36:00 PM)
Sex, Drugs and David DeSantis! !

Hope the hangover isn't tooooo bad friend. Good Piece.

Regards. Craig.

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