Our First Gig Poem by David DeSantis

Our First Gig

Rating: 4.5


Groggily lurching
towards
a snail's pace
forray,

you've been a disaster
but never like this.

last nights debut
a triumph of sound,

You rocked
You rolled
and perhaps a bit much

Common Sense
and Sunday
the two should mix well

have a drink,
have another
ease the nerves
celebration
ease the nerves
drink it up
stop at 12
slip at 1
on at 2..
3 at
bed.

Now
I can't even focus
on writing this poem,

but its all I can do
from a head on a desk.

Copyright (C) David DeSantis

Monday, July 28, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: alcohol,music
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank Cannon 03 August 2008

Sunday is a poor apology for what's coming next - Monday - and an opportunity to try and remember what went before - Saturday nights gruesomely wild gig! ! Sláinte.

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Craig Anderson 31 July 2008

Sex, Drugs and David DeSantis! ! Hope the hangover isn't tooooo bad friend. Good Piece. Regards. Craig.

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Jurietta Duraan 28 July 2008

Yes, it's all you can do...... and you do it so well...

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