Our Family, My Family Poem by Patrick Villareal

Our Family, My Family

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Our family, My family, so broken and divided are we
So caught up with anger amongts ourselves, so much we cannot see
So focused on bitter disputes and drawn out battle lines
Still trying to achieve victory against these unbreakable vines
Stuck in the murkey water trying to get free
Our family, my family so broken and divided are we

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcus Mckinley 18 October 2011

nicely done. i like the reality of your poem. it fits in most peoples family situations. just remember it only takes one to gather the pieces and it takes all to put them together.

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