Our Dear Parrot Poem by Bharati Nayak

Our Dear Parrot

Rating: 4.6


You stayed with me as a fond memory.
The green feathers and your chattering.
I know you were angry when we pulled your tail
and tormented you inside the cage.
But you were our mother's pet.
and you loved to be fed
with rice and milk by her hands.
The cage was shut from outside.
But you could easily open it from inside
and enjoy the pleasure of freedom at your own will

Like a child you loved my mother

showed your emotions

by spreading your wings and pecking

at her fingers

giving her

bits of your own food

It was pleasure to observe

the tenderness besotted with love.

You were part of our family

Loved and cared

But one day you flew away

Perhaps you wanted to discover

A world outside the cage

You did not come back

Perhaps you did not know

How to return

Perhaps you did not know

And would never know

We were crying

Mother and we

Waiting.

Friday, March 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,memory,pet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2017

The cage was shut from outside. But you could easily open it from inside and enjoy the pleasure of freedom at your own will... I am so happy that the bird could handle the cage from inside to get freedom. Once the bird got out but didn't return and it was great grief for the poetess's family... heart touching depiction. Many thanks dear Bharati for posting such a lovely poem...10

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Muhammad Ali 25 March 2017

beautiful, emotions filled in the lines beautifully. bird flew away and didn't know how to return

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Nosheen Irfan 26 March 2017

Bitter-sweet memories recalled in fondness. Emotional attachment with a pet is natural n beautiful. A heart-touching write. I also had kittens as pets. Their memory stays with me to this day. A lovely trip down the memory lane. An evocative piece.10

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Rod Mendieta 07 October 2017

As is customary now, I say I was brought here by Bri's Showcase. God! Wonderful and sad poem. Almost shed a tear, and that's no small accomplishment for any poem, given that I can be accurately called 'borderline cynic'!

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Bharati Nayak 08 October 2017

Thanks a lot Rod Mendieta for reading and commenting on my poem.It is so nice to know that this poem has touched you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2022

A wonderful poem.... brilliantly expressed

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Anjandev Roy 21 October 2022

Beautifully penned.....wonderful to read....thank u....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2022

A lovely poem dear poetess. I like the delicacy of poetic expression. Top score and to my favourite! !

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Varsha M 01 August 2021

Bharati ma'am you reminded me of my friend's experience. She also had a parrot a family member but one day it was gone and couldn't be traced back. Beautiful.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2021

Touching and amusing poem, superbly written dear Poetess! 5 Stars full on Top. I have enjoyed very much.

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