Ouch Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Ouch

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It was a marriage ceremony,
A high heel injured his foot,
He said,
Ouch!

She was a beautiful girl,
Pain of beauty is pleasing,
He said,
It’s all right.

It was a dark night,
Of energy shortage,
A slipper rode his old foot,
A mild pain of a bulky old woman!

Hell with you,
Are you blind!
She said,
Ouch!

Saturday, April 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2015

Nicelyenvisioned, interesting composition. Many thanks.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 April 2015

A bitter truth.................................................10

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Valsa George 18 April 2015

Double standards.........! ! Most of us are like this only! Interesting write!

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