Orpheus Ritual Cave Tour Guide Poem by Terence George Craddock

Orpheus Ritual Cave Tour Guide

Rating: 5.0


welcome to my office
how do you like my office?
my cave is my office?
visit as often as you need?

every day performing guide...
duties an Orpheus ritual slide...
into adventure underworld...
book if you please no prior notice?

aircon a steady 8 to 11 degrees
celsius year round to please
scenic underworld tours amaze

'modern people have funny
ways of earning money'
salary is summer job honey


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written January 2014 23&24/1/2014.Titled, octave arrangement, written out 23rd January 2014, sestet arrangement written out 24th January 2014. 'Orpheus ritual' comment and two quoted lines by the novelist and poet Miroslavia Odalovic. The poem references one of our almost daily conversations from the 16th and 17th of January 2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miroslava Odalovic 26 January 2014

I often write responsive lines, has always been a fruitful interaction, really glad you're back.

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Terry Craddock 25 January 2014

:) usually octave and sestet if writing in this form written rapidly on the same day; your used to me doing that, have written many poems on line while talking to you, or later from conversations with you :)

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Miroslava Odalovic 24 January 2014

I remember the exchange. :) So, you think octave one day and sestet the other. That's interesting. :)

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