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ONElia AVElar

Rookie - 12 Points (Bulgaria)

(Organic)


the lizard of happiness
crawls down my neck
swift crossing bosom -
thin flash on hot skin
disappears noiseless
between opening-legs
in a concrete building
on the seventh floor
air conditioner and iron bed
digit-key-code for the door
plastic table and TV
still organic you and me

Submitted: Monday, August 29, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, September 13, 2011

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  • Rookie - 657 Points Unwritten Soul (3/8/2012 8:58:00 AM)

    It really organic, and water with distilled thought...Since our life still under construction keep your life organic always! hahaha joking :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,180 Points Hans Vr (10/13/2011 9:02:00 AM)

    Wow, ONElia. Long time, I had not visited your poetry, but you are still a top poet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Original Unknown Girl (8/30/2011 5:14:00 AM)

    I love this poem, there is a subtle eroticism to it. The lizard of happiness crawling across the neck and swift crossing bosom give us a hint of something more intense and yet the poem itself is scant of detail so gives chance for the imagination to fill in the gaps. Great work dear One. HG: -) x (Report) Reply

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