ONElia AVElar

Rookie - 12 Points (Bulgaria)

(Organic)


the lizard of happiness
crawls down my neck
swift crossing bosom -
thin flash on hot skin
disappears noiseless
between opening-legs
in a concrete building
on the seventh floor
air conditioner and iron bed
digit-key-code for the door
plastic table and TV
still organic you and me

Submitted: Monday, August 29, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem ((Organic) by ONElia AVElar )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (3/8/2012 8:58:00 AM)

    It really organic, and water with distilled thought...Since our life still under construction keep your life organic always! hahaha joking :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,547 Points Hans Vr (10/13/2011 9:02:00 AM)

    Wow, ONElia. Long time, I had not visited your poetry, but you are still a top poet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Original Unknown Girl (8/30/2011 5:14:00 AM)

    I love this poem, there is a subtle eroticism to it. The lizard of happiness crawling across the neck and swift crossing bosom give us a hint of something more intense and yet the poem itself is scant of detail so gives chance for the imagination to fill in the gaps. Great work dear One. HG: -) x (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. Alone, Edgar Allan Poe
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  4. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  5. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  6. Nothing Gold Can Stay, Robert Frost
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  8. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  9. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  10. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe

Poem of the Day

poet Richard Lovelace

Tell me not (Sweet) I am unkind,
That from the nunnery
Of thy chaste breast and quiet mind
To war and arms I fly.

True, a new mistress now I chase,
...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. It isn't easy!, Lubinda Lubinda
  2. I Am Third, Perry Biggerstaff
  3. The Nigeria Political Vampires, Chinweokwu Sunlight M. Ndubu ..
  4. Alack! Afore! Alack! Afore!, Dexsta Ray
  5. WAR modern art-form of meaninglessness, George Dee Vuy
  6. I let myself, Elena Ioannou
  7. Love Is Hard, Is It Poetry
  8. Broken Waves, Pintu Mahakul
  9. PH: Poetry Writing: In Poetry, Brian Johnston
  10. Moving Out, Adriana Avila
[Hata Bildir]