Organ Donation Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Organ Donation

Rating: 4.8


I whispered
Talk to me
Help me
To donate faith
To donate heart
You sighed
I cried
Rainy eyes
Replied
It might help you
To have a good tide
We wept
Do that
Accept

(2008/9/30)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 01 October 2008

New taste/newstyle with full of love.........10+

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Lousa Deyzel 01 October 2008

it is written exelint i love the way u play with the words it is exelent, and the tears and the heart tells it all.i love it. but then u have to have a knolage of poems to understand it.

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M M 01 October 2008

A very touching poem, whose last word sums up the most difficult part... 10

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Lynda Robson 01 October 2008

Written from the heart, as always touching and wise, 10 Lynda xx

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Caterpillar MC 01 October 2008

You have expressed the idea in simple words, and yet got the message across. Good one.

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Tsira Goge 30 October 2008

Very touching whisper.... 10 Tsira

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Seema Chowdhury 06 October 2008

very nice. i enjoyed. Eid Mubarak to you and your family.

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Jessica Rosalie Smith 04 October 2008

i really like this poem especially 'you sighed i cried rainy eyes replied'..however, i don't really understand the 'do that' line i think that part needs a bit improving so that the poem flows a little but other than that good job! =)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 October 2008

Heart melts when someone says ' i love you'

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Shani Bogamuwa 01 October 2008

I like the way it's listed it's sweet the emotion slightly bitter yet sweet

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