I whispered
Talk to me
Help me
To donate faith
To donate heart
You sighed
I cried
Rainy eyes
Replied
It might help you
To have a good tide
We wept
Do that
Accept
(2008/9/30)
it is written exelint i love the way u play with the words it is exelent, and the tears and the heart tells it all.i love it. but then u have to have a knolage of poems to understand it.
A very touching poem, whose last word sums up the most difficult part... 10
Written from the heart, as always touching and wise, 10 Lynda xx
You have expressed the idea in simple words, and yet got the message across. Good one.
i really like this poem especially 'you sighed i cried rainy eyes replied'..however, i don't really understand the 'do that' line i think that part needs a bit improving so that the poem flows a little but other than that good job! =)
I like the way it's listed it's sweet the emotion slightly bitter yet sweet
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
New taste/newstyle with full of love.........10+