Orchard Of Celebrations! Poem by vaibhav vizard

Orchard Of Celebrations!

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Every moment in life is like celebration,
and to celebrate, it is our hearts elation.
Life is likely to be an orchard,
where nothing is impossible and hard.
But these are only figment of imaginations,
that life is dull, drab and monotonous.
Innumerable blossoms are blooming here,
to enjoy it, we have to mount ourselves on a chair.
Because to observe its immense beauty,
extreme silence and peaceful surrounding needed,
then we can take fun of this orchard.
Every bit of time and breathe,
is bringing celebration for us.
Now time yells to recognize it crisply,
and if recognized, then enjoy its lovely sensation.
sadness, sorrows, sufferings are strictly prohibited here,
and thats why it is not blessed to everyone.
As to remain unhappy and unpleasant is our daily chorse,
like responsibility of whole world is yours.
Once a guy entered this incredible orchard,
nothing else will be required to him for apologise.
but lot many cactuses are there in the way,
whom we have to cross and overcome one day,
and if overcomed from such type of obstacles,
then no one can resist us from celebrations.

Saturday, July 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: celebrations
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 17 October 2015

nicely done

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2015

Agreed. Every moment is for celebration and it is upto you how you wish to celebrate. Well done. Beautiful job soothing and encouraging.+ 20.

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I like this, in particular your variable /isolated rhyme employment.. You begin & end the work in rhyme, as well as utilizing the term '' celebrating/celebration in your opening & closing line...Unique, and it lends an air of bonus creativity to an already quality piece of work...Well Done, V.V.! ~FjR~

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Vaibhav Vizard 08 July 2015

thanks, i was in need of your admiration!

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