Tara Crown

Rookie (11/11/74)

Orbital Inertia - Poem by Tara Crown

Inside a capsule of brilliant words
and silent laughter
gliding with the stars

Pulling out objects to
examine and angle a narrative
like describing the moon

I put my ear next
to your explicatives
and heard the drum
your heart

And sorted through
peices of your wit that
clicked together like
loose diamonds in my hand

I knew how close
one could get to another
without ever touching

Because when you said
'I would have liked to meet you on Earth'
I smelled soap and salt


Comments about Orbital Inertia by Tara Crown

  • Rookie Declan McHenry (3/5/2006 9:58:00 PM)

    An engaging write Tara. Some intriguing images. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 57 Points Linda Hepner (2/16/2006 11:49:00 AM)

    Your ear is receiving your lover's words straight into your cognitive brain. Brilliant! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie William Jackson (2/8/2006 11:02:00 PM)

    Cool poem. I like the thought of gliding with the stars. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,126 Points Kee Thampi (1/29/2006 11:17:00 PM)

    this is really a lovable poem for us
    thanks, u may write more and more
    thampi (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 29, 2006



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