Orbital Inertia Poem by Tara Crown

Orbital Inertia

Rating: 5.0


Inside a capsule of brilliant words
and silent laughter
gliding with the stars

Pulling out objects to
examine and angle a narrative
like describing the moon

I put my ear next
to your explicatives
and heard the drum
your heart

And sorted through
peices of your wit that
clicked together like
loose diamonds in my hand

I knew how close
one could get to another
without ever touching

Because when you said
'I would have liked to meet you on Earth'
I smelled soap and salt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Declan McHenry 05 March 2006

An engaging write Tara. Some intriguing images.

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Linda Hepner 16 February 2006

Your ear is receiving your lover's words straight into your cognitive brain. Brilliant!

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William Jackson 08 February 2006

Cool poem. I like the thought of gliding with the stars.

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Kee Thampi 29 January 2006

this is really a lovable poem for us thanks, u may write more and more thampi

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