Orange Disc! Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Orange Disc!



Up into the mount
suspended went
the disc of orange
round;
slid away and said:
bye! you my sweet dusk!

Desperate dusk said:
down you go to see
your dear dawn;
and tomorrow
that late, that long
you'll come home forlorn!

10 04 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 15 April 2008

a very amusing way of writing on sun rise/set!

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Deepti Agarwal 16 April 2008

amazing.... a beautiful write.... lovely imagery..

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Flora Gillingham 16 April 2008

Beautiful dusky poem, K. F

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Seema Chowdhury 22 April 2008

sweet expressions. read my poem SUNSET. you will enjoy.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 May 2008

terrific descriptions of the sun.........keep going kesav

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Mamta Agarwal 12 February 2009

Sun caught between dawn and dusk- what a lovely poem, so unusual and endearing is your discerning eye. thanks Kesav. I really need to read more of your earlier poems.10

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Reshma Ramesh 09 February 2009

orange disc dawn and dusk.................superb

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Winnie Angel 02 February 2009

...a poem abt the natural beauty and everyday doing of the Sun..well presented in a beautiful way..color plays a beautiful role....Winnie 10 for u

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C T Heart 17 October 2008

So perfect way of poetic description of sun's life like its corona when gaze upon with love in one's heart..........

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 16 October 2008

........GORGEOUS......so short yet so fluent and perfect.

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