Or Liver, Or Bladder, Or Kidneys.... [medical Worries, Mixed With Humor; Anorexia; An Ex-Wife; Limerick? ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Or Liver, Or Bladder, Or Kidneys.... [medical Worries, Mixed With Humor; Anorexia; An Ex-Wife; Limerick? ]



Do clearly-seen ribs anorexia mean?
Donna fears, to it, she may lean.
I say it’s time to fear
when she looks in mirror
and then CLEARLY sees outline of spleen.

(2-26-2006)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
hopefully no one takes offense at my using a seriously unhealthy condition as a jumping off point for my attempted humor! anyone who is told she/he is looking anorexic might benefit from consulting with a doctor instead of reading this poem. Donna was my wife # 3. still alive and kicking last i knew.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 19 September 2013

well, i remember my own mistakes in writing the limericks, using the mistaken medical words.ha ha ha..will medicine survive us to not get old? i like to mend a drug that keep us always young.(i will make it in my stories..) how brilliant this poems is! very nice very nice and again, very nice by the way, my uncle, James, gives his regards to you.

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Noreen Carden 18 September 2013

Hello Bri a very amusing tongue in cheek look at a serious subject As always your humour shines through well done

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