Bri Edwards


Or Liver, Or Bladder, Or Kidneys.... [medical worries, mixed with humor; anorexia; an ex-wife; Limerick? ]


Do clearly-seen ribs anorexia mean?
Donna fears, to it, she may lean.
I say it’s time to fear
when she looks in mirror
and then CLEARLY sees outline of spleen.

(2-26-2006)

Submitted: Sunday, September 08, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 09, 2013

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hopefully no one takes offense at my using a seriously unhealthy condition as a jumping off point for my attempted humor! anyone who is told she/he is looking anorexic might benefit from consulting with a doctor instead of reading this poem. Donna was my wife # 3. still alive and kicking last i knew.

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  • Rookie - 95 Points Ellias Aghili (9/19/2013 9:05:00 AM)

    well, i remember my own mistakes in writing the limericks, using the mistaken medical words.ha ha ha..will medicine survive us to not get old? i like to mend a drug that keep us always young.(i will make it in my stories..)
    how brilliant this poems is!
    very nice
    very nice
    and again, very nice
    by the way, my uncle, James, gives his regards to you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 371 Points Noreen Carden (9/18/2013 6:09:00 PM)

    Hello Bri a very amusing tongue in cheek look at a serious subject
    As always your humour shines through well done (Report) Reply

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