Opulence Poem by Farah Ilyas

i love the comfortable canter of this write....also the changes of patter.... was a joy to read even if the message at points is sad the end seems positive....love this line so much...Satisfaction & contentment are genuine lavishness.

Yes, Gratification, Satisfaction & contentment are genuine lavishness. If our thoughts starts voyage to deem. yes farah, but if we try to understand it! ! ! thanks so much for this write! ! !

Poverty makes people weak...................... What if I oppose? What if I do not agree. It makes them strong. Believe me it does Farah. It was a deep poem and the theme can be applied to any society.

a brilliant topic you have choose, poverty do make one week for many reasons, i mean i am not saying that there are other things to live for but still it is a very important fact that we can not ignore..........good job mam....brilliant write.....again i am a fan

a very nice poem, carrying a strong message...well written

Indeed poverty makes people weak as it narrows discretion. A well articulated and nicely penned poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Truth is such you depicted that two part fantastically decorated and beautified the theme keep it up 10

Contentment's d best wealth as provd by yor fine poem. Kudos!

A very beautiful write, Farah! The whole poem is lovely but the lines I loved most are- Gratification, / Satisfaction & contentment are genuine lavishness. / If our thoughts starts voyage to deem! Great philosophy from so young a mind! Thanks for sharing!

nice, the beginning is very fast with true tinge of truth, the second, reveals more truth..love it