Opposite Ends Of A Hallway Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Opposite Ends Of A Hallway Tanka

Rating: 4.5


standing still
at the opposite ends
of a hallway
in my dream...
youthful mother and aging me

Saturday, July 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,dream,mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 01 August 2016

Brilliant one. Nicely written, I invite you to read some of my haiku and tanka...Thanks for sharing.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 30 July 2016

Chenou, another beautiful poem. Every time I log on, i go to read the works of two poets 1) Kelly Kurt who is my favorite and then you. I love your brevity, juxtaposition and your amazing ability to connect the dots with very few words. You are soon coming up to your 1000th poem. I can't wait to read it.

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