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Magic Box

Rookie - 0 Points (September 3,1992)

Opening Magic Box


I'd hold your hand then,
As soft as touching a newborn's fingers,
I'd feel sweatdrops in our palms,
Cherishing pure magic in us that lingers!

A few steps and tango turn,
Your arms on my shoulders, Mine on your waist,
I'd look at your eyes glowing,
A peck on your sweet lips, without any haste!

You'd smile under my breath,
I'd let my hands go through your forehead,
I'd whisper in those ears,
In shyness, your cheeks would turn red!

Closer and closer, knowing our hearts,
We'd be at a beginning, a new moon above
You'll own me, as I'd make you mine
We will let the world see, that we're in love! ! !

Submitted: Sunday, December 29, 2013
Edited: Monday, December 30, 2013

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Magic box is filled with love! ! ! As I write this (I'm sitting inside a bus) I'm grinning like a 2 year old! ! And people look at me! ! Oh my God! Why can't time fly? Or at least make me fly! Wait a minute.. I'm already flying right?

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  • Gold Star - 12,028 Points Valsa George (12/31/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    Reading this I too feel a kind of thrill. May your love flourish day by day and may your life become an eternal song! !

    Have a great New Year of wish fulfillment and all possible blessings of God! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 88 Points Payal Parande (12/30/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    oh someone got it bad ha ha, i am so happy for you bhai may you always keep grinning like two year boy
    happy love :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 199 Points Kavya . (12/29/2013 11:59:00 PM)

    am grinning too Aswath! so sweet and innocent wishes....i pray to God may this love bloom and continue lifelong....... (Report) Reply

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