Open Your Eyes Poem by luciana isabelle

Open Your Eyes

Rating: 4.7


Open your eyes
To see the world
To see the future
To see the people

Open your eyes
And you might seek
The similarity
The differences
And the changes

Open your eyes
So that you can think
Deeply
Without any mistakes
Without any failure

Open your eyes
And ask
Why?
What?
How?
To let yourself
Be your TRUESELF
Forever…

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 16 April 2014

The note is something special!

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Khairul Ahsan 18 August 2013

A well written poem. Open your eyes....: To let yourself Be your TRUESELF Forever… A good advice.

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Luciana Isabelle 17 August 2013

mohamad khosravi: thanks for the suggestion....appreciated it so much!

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Mohammad Khosravi 16 August 2013

Great. i Love this Style of Poems So. and i think it can be better if u USE nature instead world. and picture instead of people. like it: Open your eyes To see the future To see the nature To see the picture

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Indranil Bhaduri 08 July 2013

Lovely write...keep going

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