Open Up Poem by T. Alfred Norman

Open Up

Rating: 5.0


Speak


We-you-me
Barriers unseen
Take time people
Think

Ideas in your head
Need to be said
What is it
Speak

Digital dependency
Cell phone TV broadband
Disconnected
Satellite man

Mouths of immobile prose
Dispose society to curse
Apathetic silence
Worse

Reclusive smiles
Beam unfulfilled dreaming
Isolated unknown
Meaning

Faces traced in fear
Shear the tip of a tongue
Spittle of knowledge
Left undone

Iron sharpens iron
A mind fire create
Break the ice
Speak relate!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edwin Empestan (alba) 24 August 2008

Very deep and subtle. A 'riddle'. But needs and begs to be clarified. A question is fitting perhaps and that is... are you opening a pandora's box if you speak? ? ? Nice poem brief at that but subject to your own unique interpretation. Thanks for sharing 'TAN'. More power you're 'amazing'.

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