Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 316,858 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Open Sight - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Open sight

Confide to today
And seek the way
That shall take you to tomorrow
With lot more things to follow

Keep no past in sight
But take lessons right
Repeat no mistakes
And rightly stake

You may like many things
But try to bring
Only those colors
That can bring honor

The future shall be bright
And much to the delight
With feeling so upright
You are on the open sight

So it belongs
And longs
As your true dream
In the form of light beam

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Comments about Open Sight by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Chinedu Dike (2/26/2017 6:14:00 PM)


    Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful motivational poem elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Hasmukh and do remain blessed. (Report) Reply

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  • Sylva-onyema Uba (2/26/2017 2:49:00 PM)


    The future shall be bright
    And much to the delight
    With feeling so upright
    You are on the open sight

    Poem with good counsel.
    Embellished with good rhyme and rhythm.
    A musical poem.
    Nicely expressed.

    Sylva.
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  • (2/26/2017 8:55:00 AM)


    Beautifully envisioned nuggets of wisdom presented through equally beautiful poem. Congrats on poet of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (2/26/2017 7:46:00 AM)


    Very well written, full of wisdom.
    Congrats, Hasmukh
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  • Bharati Nayak (2/26/2017 5:55:00 AM)


    You may like many things
    But try to bring
    Only those colors
    That can bring honor
    - - - - - Yes, I too believe that Art has a responsibility.
    Congratulations for being the Poet of the Day.
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  • Tom Allport (2/26/2017 4:44:00 AM)


    an open your eyes poem and take in what is true to you? (Report) Reply

  • Muzahidul Reza (2/26/2017 3:09:00 AM)


    Keep no past in sight
    But take lessons right
    Repeat no mistakes
    And rightly stake wonderful written
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (2/26/2017 3:01:00 AM)


    Take lessons right.... cingrats on being selected.... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/26/2017 2:52:00 AM)


    With insight and honour! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (2/26/2017 1:07:00 AM)


    Congratulations! A nice thing to see your poem on the front page this day! (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (2/26/2017 12:58:00 AM)


    Congrats on poem of the day! A very interesting poem. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/4/2017 8:10:00 AM)


    Ligaw Makata Thanks Sir Hasmukh Mehta
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/3/2017 10:24:00 PM)


    welcome sherly castro
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/3/2017 9:44:00 PM)


    So it belongs

    And longs

    As your true dream

    In the form of light beam
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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 3, 2017

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 4, 2017


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