Open Sight Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Open Sight

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Open sight

Confide to today
And seek the way
That shall take you to tomorrow
With lot more things to follow

Keep no past in sight
But take lessons right
Repeat no mistakes
And rightly stake

You may like many things
But try to bring
Only those colors
That can bring honor

The future shall be bright
And much to the delight
With feeling so upright
You are on the open sight

So it belongs
And longs
As your true dream
In the form of light beam

Open Sight
Friday, February 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 26 February 2017

Congrats on poem of the day! A very interesting poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 February 2017

Take lessons right.... cingrats on being selected....

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Tom Allport 26 February 2017

an open your eyes poem and take in what is true to you?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2018

An excellent Open Sight poem, torturing the self whole night, to present this comment IF it´s alright. Congratulations for being chosen as Member Poem Of the Day, Mr. Hasmukh! I have enjoyed a very lot! A 10 and much much more for the vote. You have created 17692 poems, WOW!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2018

Excellent advice here: repeat no mistakes! Till today, you have published here on PH 17.692 poems. Now is my WOW, doubled. Thank you for sharing this very enjoyable poem, Mr. Hasmukh!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2021

A motivational piece of work sir..... thanks for sharing

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Ananda Krishnan 27 February 2018

Loved it

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Richard Wlodarski 26 February 2018

Truly inspirational! Full of wisdom. Excellent write! Hasmukh, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

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Bharati Nayak 26 February 2018

Open sight Confide to today And seek the way That shall take you to tomorrow With lot more things to follow- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Only those colors- - - - - - A lovely write about poetry- - Being open to insight we can find wonderful ways that can bring honor to our lives.

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Loaded with lovely lessons is this positive poem! Well done my friend!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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