Open Book Poem by Alfred Ramos

Open Book



Like a rose
Your prose
Drew a thorn

Cutting deep
As if asleep
And not yet born

You wrote a book
Threw a wicked hook
And knocked me out

You tainted my ego
You painted me a zero
My survival is in doubt

Your words tore off my clothes
Composed away my pose
You broke down my house of cards

Damn you to hell
I cannot break your spell
So to whom do I give my best regards

Whose soul is left to save
Now that you have danced on my grave
You wrote me an ugly epitaph

I guess the final chapter has been written
Don’t need to show where I’ve been bitten
I don’t even need to do the math

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 17 April 2009

sweetheart...keep calm...have patience...i read this piece of yours and i found smartness inside this, , a very nice expression of an open identity..smilee and all your efforts will be rewarded...i lav this piece of yours.. naizz

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Alfred Ramos

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