Opaque Poem by Leslie Ching

Opaque

Rating: 4.5


Stop being so opaque!
Oh why, why can't you see
That I won't ever hurt you
Just let your inner self be free-

Stop being so opaque!
I’m here to lend a hand
To help you when the times are hard
The one who understands-

Stop being so opaque!
Please don't hide yourself away
I know that deep inside, you shine
Like the sun on a bright day-

Stop being so opaque!
Just give me some to show
you, all the people around us
Who I'm sure you would all 'wow'

Stop being so opaque!
I thought you were my friend
I know we'll stick together
Until the very end...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surelychoo Certain 03 February 2009

: D if we were transparent we'd be seethru. XD jk jk nice poem. i envy ur talent: /

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Eddie Roa 02 February 2009

a nice plea for transparency for the beloved. nice write

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well penned nice work Krista

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Autumn Stoddard 01 February 2009

I really liked the rhyme scheme you used here. It is such an upbeat poem, which is why I believe I've enjoyed it so much. Well done.

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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