! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***onto Eternity***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***onto Eternity***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.1


in every night star stands and stares
dulcet dawn to come waking by warmth
tea cup in hand spewing scented fumes
eying all through the raves by news

yesterday is something different today
morning is never same by the evening
yet in between there lies history unknown
night never knows very freshness of sun rising

pyramid stands by its elusive strangeness
lest owes of tears slogs onto eternity
whom should we bespeaks of rune of mystery?
time when slowly slithers to edge of kisses

do their love smolder wilting ethereal?
as of lost planets shuffling in black-holes
universe fails to measure their quantum forces
rigidity of all dimensions when loses its strength

beauty yet never dies by a blooming flower
heart remembers fragrant petals of soigne rose
cloud never hides grace of love by attrition
yet love may be illusive by sultry vision.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber {lil coastie]} 26 December 2009

that was real lovely... i liked it. =)

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Alf Hutchison 27 December 2009

Subhendu will we ever understand the depths and width of eternity... well penned my friend very deep and meaningful regards Alf

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Linda Ori 27 December 2009

And time marches on into eternity! How long have the pyramids stood strong against time and the elements, and they will continue to stand. Beautiful imagery throughout, Subhendu, and a thought-provoking read. Very nice!

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Alison Cassidy 27 December 2009

From the simplicity of a single petal to the awe and grandeur of the pyramid, your poem walks with giant steps. Your passion for language is outstanding, Subhendu and you spread words with generosity and fulsome abandon onto the canvass of your vision. Love is only hidden from the receiver, but when the giver wears a mask. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr.subhendu Kar 28 December 2009

From : Tess Fielders (Sth E Queensland Australia; Female; 56) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 12/27/2009 9: 26: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear Dr Subhendu Kar Thank you for your kind wishes for the new year. I have read your poem and it is most thought provoking and deep. Thank you for sharing.

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Braja K Sarkar 13 February 2010

Beauty, yet never dies by blooming flowers...Truely poetic! Nice reading..

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 January 2010

From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !

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Harold K Schreiberg 10 January 2010

An excellent piece of poetry, full of striking images & contrasts...

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Ken E Hall 08 January 2010

Wonderful poem...eternity is always tomorrow spoken by the past ++10 regards

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John Shea 04 January 2010

Nice poem doc...my girlfriend calls me Dr. John. The Dr. of love.

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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