Only You Poem by Sandra Feldman

Only You

Rating: 5.0


I know you're there,
I feel your presence,
Everywhere,
The air I breath,
Has life of you,
The sky I see,
Has tones of you,
The sea I miss,
Misses you too,
Oh how to live,
Now, without, You?

Saturday, June 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mazhari David 09 June 2014

The one we love is a world... apart... full, complete and absolute.* *

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Khairul Ahsan 07 June 2014

Oh, such a sweet and cute poem this is! Love it.10/10.

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Kazi Maisha 07 June 2014

Wow.... Well, that was a very heart-touching poem. It reminded me of my grandpa, who I love a lot. Isn't it amazing how just a few words can impact the heart? That shows you have great control over words. Good job! :)

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Christian Hudak 07 June 2014

Wow, beautiful poem! Short, but the farthest thing from simple! Truly great (: I invite you to check out some of my own, and leave any advise for me as a writer, I would greatly appreciate it! sincerely - Christian Hudak

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