Only Way To Blame Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Only Way To Blame

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I wish to learn
And honestly earn
The praises from friends and alike
Not for any bad intention to strike

I heard you from depth
They looked much loyal to be kept till death
I wished you were certain possibility
The best ever known with super quality

I feared too with improbability
When it came to full nobility
I lacked certain inherent weaknesses
I brought many times it on face

Yes you are ideal
And it seems real too
But unfortunate as it seems
I feel odd with current to swim

Will you pardon me forever?
If I fail to come along ever
I shall blame no one but time
That is only way to blame sometimes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

I wish to learn And honestly earn

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

Sarah Russell likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

Naresh Kumar29 minutes ago Sometimes forced rhyming is fun and funny. But when you're trying to be serious, it's just sad. Weird rambling thought process. I don't get it, but I get that you tried. Keep writing!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

I feel odd with current to swim! ! ! ! ! ????? S?tta18 minutes ago I feel odd with current to swim! ! ! ! ! Comment +1 ... ...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

CrimsonBlood27830 minutes ago... good poem ...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

Jaye Very good rhythm. Keep it up, TFS.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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