Vicky Biorseth

Rookie (1967 / Florida)

Only Teasing


My spirit is on its knees
My will is willing to give up
My heart is unrecognizable, bludgened, bleeding, bruised and broken
Years of seaching...for What?
The thought of you was nice for while
The possibility pleasing
I told myself that you were the one
But I was only teasing

Submitted: Saturday, March 24, 2007
Edited: Sunday, February 12, 2012

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  • Silver Star - 3,593 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (1/16/2015 12:07:00 AM)

    Sufficient spoken by words just to be recognized. Sufficient to be alone to catch the thread of love. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,755 Points Bernard Snyder (1/15/2015 3:43:00 PM)

    Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem, Vicky! Also, congrats on this poem being chosen as 'poem of the day''. Well-deserved! . (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,463 Points John Richter (1/15/2015 11:24:00 AM)

    There is nothing more emotion-provoking then new or lost love..... which is why poems about such are plentiful. You will never outperform the likes of Shakespeare, Browning, or Angelou in such things... You have talent. I'm jaded, but still will suggest you write about things that you find in life - not about things you want in life...

    From Amy Lowell - A Decade

    When you came
    ....you were like red wine and honey,
    And the taste of you burnt
    ........my mouth with its sweetness.
    Now you are like morning bread,
    Smooth and pleasant,
    I hardly taste you at all,
    for I know your savor,
    But I am completely nourished.

    Remove yourself from your poetry - read it undetached. Does it evoke the same commonality that Amy stressed? Love poetry can be wonderful - but it must be superb or it is nothing but an idle thought. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,230 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (1/15/2015 7:07:00 AM)

    What an innocent attempt to tease(please) his own conscience! Nicely wrapped in a poetic shell. Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,882 Points Kim Barney (1/15/2015 6:15:00 AM)

    Very nice, except for the misspelled word mentioned by Babatunde Aremu.
    Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day on January 15 for three years in a row now! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,842 Points Babatunde Aremu (1/15/2015 3:29:00 AM)

    Talking of human emotion which is temporal. Nice write but do you mean to say 'bludgeoned'? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (1/15/2014 10:01:00 PM)

    playful......memory to with time erase (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (1/15/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    ....it's nice to know you were only teasing.. nice write.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,142 Points Tiku . (1/15/2014 6:28:00 AM)

    very nice.short and sweet.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 816 Points Leslie Philibert (1/15/2014 5:12:00 AM)

    Like the expanded couplet in the last three lines, the capital in What surprises..a good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Alistair Graham (1/15/2014 2:59:00 AM)

    Reflection


    At night when you climb into bed
    The thoughts of the day in your head
    Do you drift into sleep
    Or fall into the deep
    Fine-linen, debating, bedstead (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,869 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/15/2013 10:40:00 PM)

    sometimes, we escape from reality using ' only teasing '! well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anushree Das (1/15/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    brilliant writing. well done (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,133 Points Tony Karas (1/15/2013 3:58:00 AM)

    (((hug))) I know how that feels. Nice write. (Report) Reply

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