Only One Quality Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Only One Quality

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There lies only one quality
Human mind and its ability
To think of a poor person
With all compassionate reasons

Despite being from hand to mouth
The ideas run from north to south
When sun rises from the east
It brings new kid n hope when sets in west

Above all is only one quality
That is love for people and humanity
They need one word of simple love
“How are you” ask once and believe in response

Nothing will come to help except satisfaction
That is the pure feeling and indication
If you feel any time that worth while is being done
Think of divine time that has stayed with you and not gone

Only few people can think about others
That is gift from almighty to offer
The person never suffers in entire journey
As all the good qualities are protected by almighty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 23 February 2014

Protected by almighty who is within us all. good writing sir.

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The queen of quality that can change the world. Well done my friend!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 February 2014

Comment +1 . Robin Cleary4 minutes ago Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 February 2014

good Alvin Dehart3 minutes ago Very good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 February 2014

It can be more refined V.M. Marcoccia2 minutes ago The point is pretty clear, flows nicely but it could use a bit of work. Good framework for a strong poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome lisa lombardi n mericella remirez about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 February 2014

A Wonderful poem. Very true said, just a few caring words makes a lot of difference.....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 February 2014

This one was okay Travis Kelly9 minutes ago Good effort but needs work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 February 2014

Divine Tracy Bollinger3 minutes ago That is the one ability that truly separates us from the beast in the field. The ability to put ourselves in their place even if only to acknowledge them. Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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