Only Existence Exists Poem by nader baheri

Only Existence Exists

Rating: 5.0


A very dark garden
Which is enlightened by the light of a match
See the shadows of plants
Dancing in the shimmering light
So the light gives them life
When the light is faded
They remain still in the dark garden
Hollowed from life
Only existense exists

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to Unwritten soul who always tries to enlighten my dark thoughts
thank you _Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 16 March 2013

nice one and it alights my thoughts. so brilliant. and yeah, i agree with you. Unwritten soul make all of us to think lightly. well done

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Unwritten Soul 16 March 2013

A write for me? Thanks Nader, i may be a light to you but you a plant you still can survive in the dark...You just need time to grow and having stronger root...Existence of your life is exist is only exist if you know what you hold...and sure God let you hold something to play a certain role in this world..in your life..so be bright yourself...you are a light to someone else..and someone else to other..life is a chain reaction_Soul

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 15 March 2013

i see all there because everything is there...... thought provoking and insightful.......

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Shahzia Batool 14 May 2013

Nice lines for soul! ! !

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 May 2013

The very truth in ist boolean represention.No more logic holds it more in water.Great write.

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Valerie Dohren 07 April 2013

A fine dedication poem - very well penned.

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Poetheart Morgan 30 March 2013

without lights nothing can be seeing! We need that kind of Soul and light in our life. Sure, that is our light called Soul!

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A Dark Lifetime . 25 March 2013

Woooow I love it! ! I sort of think about every life around us in this poem. That everything has its light and darks and how we survive. Emotionally survive.

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