Onion Skin Disguise Poem by Ray Lucero

Onion Skin Disguise



Layer after layer to peel off
Issues, that no longer serve
“No not I”….you may scoff
Then get what you deserve

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This poem moves me because I must ask forgiveness each night for myself to my God. We all have the same God and we all are not perfect. Great poem. MKP

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Ivan Donn Carswell 23 August 2007

Ray, an apt and well presented analogy. With onions however the disguise goes all the way to the core! Rgds, Ivan

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