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Onion (Cinquain)

Onion
Like it
Is our friendship
When you cut it
Tears

Submitted: Thursday, May 16, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 12, 2013


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

A popular form of Cinquain- The 1st line is of one word (Heading)
The 2nd line is of two words
The 3rd line is of three words
The 4th line is of four words
The 5th line is of one word
which is related to the heading.

Comments about this poem (A Traveler in this World by chandra thiagarajan )

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  • Captain Cur (5/30/2013 11:28:00 AM)

    Onion, tears, friendship, many layers to this poem.

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  • Indira Babbellapati (5/25/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    this is very simple wy of putting a heavy experience, i admire the mind that envisaged...!

  • Kavya . (5/23/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    Bingo! a short poem with a long message

  • Valerie Dohren (5/18/2013 2:31:00 PM)

    Great metaphor - well done.

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/17/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    1,2,3,4 well known facts with the imagery verry good

  • Shahzia Batool (5/17/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    very strong, very powerful piece! ! ! thanks for the explanatory notes too.

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