One Object Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

One Object

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Kites were always eager
With almost invisible anger
To present like rainbow
In the form of arrow

To pierce through colors
And establish honor
For supremacy
As rainbow did with beauty

Yes colors represent mood
Simple thought as food
How come colors present nature?
And shape our future

To appear in vacuum and vast horizon
The rainbow has field day to be won
The kite has to reach maximum height
With thread’s help the kite with colors can be right there

It is not only children’s delight
But supreme childhood’s right too
It is taking their fancy to the top
With colors in the form of loop

One object is divine
Others are on ground to draw line
One can not compare
Yet attempt is worthwhile to dare

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Kites were always eager With almost invisible anger

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

well written jessica herringa2 minutes ago I think I would have to read this a couple times to really understand the meaning of this. Orperhaps it is obvious and I just can't get past my desire to look past the obvious and see the bigger picture, the meaning behind the words. Regardless it is very well written.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

welcome remrez mericelel 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

Emilia Ayuk and Ramesh Doshi like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2014

nice Sai Krishna5 minutes ago good Comment +1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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