One Last Night Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

One Last Night

Rating: 4.6


I've been thinking for sometime
believing that I'd be alright.
Don't know if I can fight this blight
when I'm all alone at night.

I lie awake in the dark
calm but feeling stark.
I start dreaming of you
but it causes me to feel blue.

I don't know what's happening
seems the friendship is fading.
Should I stay or should I go
lately I've been missing you so.

I am tired thinking about you
it's almost breaking my heart too.
Tell me, what am I supposed to do
everything reminds me of you.

I just only wanted to say
I miss you more than everyday
and I need you so much today.
Just one last night I want you to stay
in my dream you come and we stray.


28th April 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 06 July 2008

Very beautiful and sentimental poems/// Best wishes, Tsira

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Kesav Easwaran 17 July 2008

that's good saying, joan...let the stray continue everlasting in many more days and nights...a poem beautifully expressive 10

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Chris Vanbrusselen 17 July 2008

LOVE HURTS, DOESN'T IT? CHRIS.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 21 February 2010

a beautiful poem..it seems like the words are mine but you gave it a shape. Keep writing.. GOD bless ya :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 21 February 2010

a beautiful poem..it seems like the words are mine but you gave it a shape. Keep writing.. GOD bless ya :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 21 February 2010

a beautiful poem..it seems like the words are mine but you gave it a shape. Keep writing.. GOD bless ya :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2008

True love is not easy as we do spell the word 'LOVE' itself; but, we all do have memories too.A very nice piece from you.Bye. E.K.L.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 August 2008

love intense reasons blue night still fluffs by the beauty heart yet cries for the gleams of rain passion bestirs as desccicated on the rune of desire...............wonderfully wrought by ingenious glow within, that splashes the face of dream overpowering the reef of lonliness by the night, yet luscious green by the colors, eloquence of love betides by desire, great write rain when smooches the thirsty dust,10+, thanks for sharing

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