One Hearts Pathos Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

One Hearts Pathos

Rating: 5.0


Why these eyes don’t dry?
Why hearts pain doesn’t end?
Why my breath doesn’t stop?
Why? Even after leaving me
My love on you doesn’t shrink

Why eyes can’t forget you?
Why heart plays your song?
Why I breathe in memories?
Why? Even after forgetting me
My love on you still stays

Why eyes close for you?
Why heart beats or you?
Why breath waits for you?
Why? Even after insulting me
My love on you doesn’t end

Why eyes can’t loose sight?
Why heart can’t end light?
Why breath can’t stop fight?
Why? Even after breaking me
My love on you doesn’t break

Why these eyes don’t dry?
Why hearts pain doesn’t end?
Why my breath doesn’t stop?
Why? Even after leaving me
My love on you doesn’t shrink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 08 July 2009

questions in fond and questions in pain........... fine write.........

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premji premji 08 July 2009

love is a tenant, never intend to vacate!

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Marieta Maglas 08 July 2009

nice anaphora: ''Why? Even after forgetting me My love on you still stays'' lovely poem...10+ from me

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Ted M 08 July 2009

She came, She saw and She Conquered your Heart to rule; Your Heart is Out of your Control. Feelings expressed so beautifully,

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 July 2009

hello sir! ! ! hey i know this feeling.. emotions seems to flow throw your poems.. i really felt this questions.. i mean many people ask these questions from themselves.. and world think they are mentally weak.. i d say you are a person that has genuine feelings! ! ! nice one indeed..10+== with lots of love shan

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Catrina Heart 09 July 2009

So many questions that left the heart in a stressful situation and the mind in an anguish state....well expressed poem.10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 09 July 2009

Captures the torments of love

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Eyan Desir 08 July 2009

no body sould be insulted...... ppl neeed 2 be treated with class.... but nice poem

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Louis Rams 08 July 2009

one can only ask the heart that question. but he heart can only give one response (forever) gr8t write a ten

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