One Day Queen Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

One Day Queen

Rating: 5.0


“Ask anything from me “I shall fulfill
Almighty God asked me for realization of will
”in fact I don’t deserve for it any more”
With no skill in me how can I explore? I replied

”You have all the potentials as fake poet
how can you keep silence and remain quiet?
You tried very hard to unset many stalwarts
Without poetic skill you tried to be smart”

You have used talent for gaining ground
Nothing extra ordinary in you was seen or found
You knew your talent and its limitations
Still you have tried to prove it with citations

What else you want to score and achieve?
Do you believe in “earn respect and give? ”
If not then ask whatever you wish or want
I may fulfill your demand and grant

“Make me poetess queen for one day”
I want to have complete rule and say
One or two days may sufficiently pave the way
Just help me out to find golden ray

I failed to achieve by dishonest mean
I was desperately trying or very keen
I took precaution that I was not involved in the scene
But in all games virtually I was in

“I appreciate all your qualities”
“That is how I have provided you the facilities”
You will wear poet’s crown for two days
Thereafter find the convenient route or find the ways

But bear in mind and don’t take it for granted
You are slur on poet’s part and never wanted
Poetry level has been brought to lowest ebb
This can continue only on particular web

Many more are following in same way
Without talent they want to have sway
How can this be a healthy and fair game?
Where only tricks, fame and matters the name

This is mere example of what is actually going on
Artificial ratings with popular voting game is on
It may boost ranking and popularity drive
People may fall in trap and really believe




To reach on the top is not child’s play
It has so much in it for readers to say
It may take years to build public opinion
Nobody can help even some influential union

You will have to carve out your own image
It doesn’t matter how much is your age
You must have progressive views without any bondage
It must come on as if fine print on page

God also helps those who help themselves
Person who knows his limitation and behaves
Rest will follow its natural course
Nothing can stop him from reaching top of course

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 05 April 2010

‘…You tried very hard to unset many stalwarts/Without poetic skill you tried to be smart” These lines are educative to me…as usual you always perfuse out noble thoughts thanks Sir 10+ Ms. Nivedita Uk

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Lady Grace 02 December 2009

'Many more are following in same way Without talent they want to have sway How can this be a healthy and fair game? Where only tricks, fame and matters the name '...the poem is nice..and this could be for everybody..i quoted the last stanza coz for me it's the highlight..meaningful..

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george george 30 November 2009

Interesting poem, the line I like the best is: 'You will wear poet’s crown for two days Thereafter find the convenient route or ways' Nice!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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