One Day Noticed I Poem by Aftab Alam

One Day Noticed I

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You can kill me with sword or with a gun,
But don't kill me with your words, for fun,

It's better to die at once, with a single shot,
Why do you try to kill me million times in a slot,

When it hits in the heart; a catastrophe to mind,
With these eyes, world for me, the world of blind,

A sound- More heat is needed for gold to shine,
Give heat treatment, this is your life, not mine,

One day noticed I-
Elephant walks majestically, with no care,
When dog barks, full throated, with dare.

Friday, August 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: teacher
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

A thoughtful poem. Very true said in few lines.... You can kill me with sword or with a gun, But don't kill me with your words, for fun... It is better to die in life only once, rather than being killed each day with words. Elephants move unaffected by the dogs who bark at them....Thoughtful write. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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