One Day I Wish To Wake Up... Poem by mona martinez

Hi, mona I do feel this, seemed questioning and a bit resigned It needs some fight back? go get your man lol, as a Scot we tend to use humour in difficult situations it helps me keep control of the situation, I agree with 'poetry is a good way to express emotions'though I feel it is important to keep the poem as poetry and one would think if it was about a depressing subject it would be wise to keep those poems aside until the really clever one comes out, but hey am no expert, ill read some more now as I have only read this one x

one day i wish to wake up, and everything to be alright, to have the 'GIRL' of my dreams, laying beside me, Every ones dream indeed Mona.... your poem remids me of a song again... WelCome To My Life- Simple Plan 'Do you ever feel like breaking down? Do you ever feel out of place? Like somehow you just don't belong And no one understands you Do you ever wanna runaway? Do you lock yourself in your room? With the radio on turned up so loud That no one hears you screaming No you don't know what it's like When nothing feels all right You don't know what it's like To be like me To be hurt To feel lost To be left out in the dark To be kicked when you're down To feel like you've been pushed around To be on the edge of breaking down And no one's there to save you No you don't know what it's like Welcome to my life Do you wanna be somebody else? Are you sick of feeling so left out? Are you desperate to find something more? Before your life is over Are you stuck inside a world you hate? Are you sick of everyone around? With their big fake smiles and stupid lies While deep inside you're bleeding No you don't know what it's like When nothing feels all right You don't know what it's like To be like me To be hurt To feel lost To be left out in the dark To be kicked when you're down To feel like you've been pushed around To be on the edge of breaking down And no one's there to save you No you don't know what it's like Welcome to my life Just a part of a song Mona... This is how I feel..... May be you are feeling the same way too.... For many people who i love so much... for the kind of person i am today.. is not good enough..... so it hurts... and always feel like braking away.... ahh! ! ! ! ! some time feel like breaking away from PH too.. But keep penning your emotions in to poems.... it always helps...... see you soon... and this poem is presented well indeed.. i see a great development in your writing too... development in the sense, now the reader gets moved with the flow of your lines... 10 for you with loves shan