Once Again Poem by C. K. Young

Once Again

Rating: 5.0


'First the worst'
They say...
'Second the best'
So cliche...
But
Its not true...
It hurts
Just as much as the first one too...
It just hurts more and more
Every time...
The sound a breaking heart
Let it chime...
When I saw you with your new boyfriend
I heard a crack...
Once again
My heart is broken and black...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 26 September 2011

Very powerful words. I love the closing lines to this piece, they're simply magnificent. I hope you will continue to write.

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Romeo Della Valle 19 September 2011

Like I said in my poem IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, ' I learned the hard and painful way that whenever there is an ending, there is also a new beginning' 'What I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky'. Your sad but well penned write clearly shows your strength and poetic potential to make you one of the best! 10+++ If time permits, you can read some of my poems and you can see that I went through what you experienced! Love is like a circle that seems to be without end or beginning! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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