On The Roof(Revision) Poem by james ivan almalvez

On The Roof(Revision)

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- This can be sung to the tune of Up On The Roof

After all the problems that I faced
I look for a good resting place
A place where I can feel so free
And no one will ever bother me

On the roof I can live peacefully
And up here, the whole town I can see
Let's go up on the roof

As I look and gaze very far
I can see the little shining stars
That always guides me on what to do
So in problems I can always go through

On the roof I can live peacefully
And up here, the whole town I can see
Let's go up on the roof

This place must have a special barrier
Cause it blocks the noise and do not make me suffer
From all the sad and frightful things
And here, at least I can sing

On the roof I can live peacefully
And up here, the whole town I can see
Let's go up on the roof

On the roof, it’s very different
From city’s harsh environment
Life’s like that on the roof
Up on the roof

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqeb Benazir 09 August 2011

Brilliant job! this is very well constructed and the rhymes and the message is very sublime! 10/10!

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