On The First Of July Poem by Soran M. H

On The First Of July

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On The First of July(1)



For the first time
Mona Lisa has cried-
For an alone brush:
It is day of birth and death
is lost in the Fog
as a withered leaf fallen
into the heart of this vast universe
without having any attention
To its downfall.
*
On the First of July
Lenore(2) with a white hair
lighting another Candle
at the tomb of life
without waiting
for the coming of any beloved
*

Those stars that you had seen
At the nights of childhood
Pass quickly in the sky.
Where will take their sorrow?
While
old Gogol (3)
coming down from the Alps
wearing his winter fur coat
Soon, dazzling his eyes
With the Lanterns light of the streets
*
After forty-four seconds
coincidentally meeting a nun
Inside a train for Rome
dressed in a black
gives you a key
On the First of July
01/07/2014


References:
* In some countries for all people who unknown their exact date of birth; the Registration office as a rule putting the first of January for all who born before 30th Jun, and for the rest who guessed born after 30th June they put the first of July.

** The Raven, Poem by Edgar Allen Poe:
Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow; - vainly I had sought to borrow.
From my books surcease of sorrow - sorrow for the lost Lenore -
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore -
Nameless here for evermore.

*** 'The Overcoat' is a short story by Ukrainian-born Russian author Nikolai Gogol, published in 1842. The story and its author have had great influence on Russian literature, as expressed in a quote attributed to Dostoevsky: 'We all come out from Gogol's 'Overcoat'.' The story has been adapted into a variety of stage and film interpretations.

Friday, February 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 02 July 2020

Dear poet Susan, Your pencil is more beautiful than luxury palaces, when you write about a poem that is neglected but alive and strong with its significance Hermeneutics. Really you are discovering the pearls in the depths of the creativity oceans, we wish you a good health, happiness and every success.

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Susan Williams 02 July 2020

Thank you for information about the First of July- that opened this poem up to me! It is sad to think upon people who do not know when they were born- -there are heartbreaking stories behind such a thing. Now I shall read this again with a deeper appreciation and understanding! 10

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Kesav Easwaran 07 February 2020

Never to forget evergreen leaves of life. You have a wonderful technique to connect different images. A well written poem. Much informative 10+

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Soran M. H 08 February 2020

Thanks Dear poet Kesav for your wonderful comment about my humble poem..Kind regards and all the best

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Shaun Cronick 29 January 2020

This has perked me up Soran another well written and delivered philosophical poem about love and life. And if taken from past snapshots of your life, there are elements of chance or fate finely woven into it. Sometimes somethings happen for a reason.They're meant to be. Excellent poem Soran 10++ and added to good reads.

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Soran M. H 29 January 2020

Honestly I am very proud of your high level of understanding deep poems, for example I put this poem on this site for many years but nobody reacted to it, even I don’t think anyone has read it, but thankfully you are the one among few people who can good read the poem and write great poems as well, excellent and thanks for your lovely comment

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2019

Bleak, leak, peak, speak! Philosophy of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soran M. H 27 December 2019

that is right Philosophy of love and life, and we can express them in so many ways and form, each of us is a special small world within the big world, the poetry can be the language of these worlds....Cheers mate, you are brilliant poet, well done

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