# # On The Face Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # On The Face

Rating: 5.0


a smile on the face
the souls endeavour to show
the love within me

a fear on the face
the body's stupidity
to hide soul within

a veil on the face
the inner beauty is seen
through the eye in it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 29 June 2009

smiling face is gifted............ very nice and well penned.......

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Indira Renganathan 29 June 2009

Very moral...and I like it the most...meaningful words

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 June 2009

Very nice thought. Good one.

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Sandra Martyres 29 June 2009

Very meaningful senryus Samanyan.....you are perfecting the art...

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Louis Rams 30 June 2009

i will take the smile on the face, to show the love within. gr8t write a ten

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Ency Bearis 30 June 2009

a good thought.......10

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 30 June 2009

Enchanting! Hilarious! Marvelous! Samanyan ji you are indeed an Asaamanyan! Kudos.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 30 June 2009

excellent way of expressing the expressions....lovely

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Carol Gall 30 June 2009

words that express so much

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