On Tears Lonely Lonely Cry Poem by Maria Sudibyo

On Tears Lonely Lonely Cry

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On tears lonely lonely cry
You always shade on my mind
Even you had flied away
Left me alone in the night

On tears lonely lonely cry
No one can take that place
My first love you have to know
You’ve never gone in my heart

Oh why, oh why
I can’t forget your kiss goodbye
I want crying to you
Bring this pain from my life

On tears lonely lonely cry
My first love you have to know
The memory was closed
In my broken lonely heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Egi David Perdana 28 April 2008

wow puisi yang indah sekali, saya rasa ini salah satu puisi terbaik yang pernah saya baca mengena dihati dan tidak muluk-muluk, saya beri nilai 10, mohon komentari juga puisi saya yang berjudul a must for love, makasih

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Ayesha Rahman 11 January 2008

Beautiful....u jus put the whole story in this poem very beautiful specially the last stanza.....

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Angela Delgado 24 January 2008

thats a good poem...keep up the good work

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Griffen 18 November 2018

So sad and Beautiful

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Aya Sunga Askert 21 November 2017

Beautiful poem. Thank you, you touched my heart.

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Dev Anand 21 August 2017

The memory In my broken lonely heart..i shall never forget the first kiss, the first love. it shall remain always in me. a very fine poem. sweet memories, sadness, sense of l oss and sense of hope.. thank you dear poetess. dev

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Stefan Van Pinxteren 17 November 2008

Very good poem it touched me deep. I like the last part the most really. Beautifull.

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Prasetya Utama 14 October 2008

Look like from the story of real life of poet.Beautiful.

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