On My Head Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

On My Head

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I end up by saying
“O lord, forgive me for anything”
I am simple and ordinary human
Loving and caring to all brethren

Grace us on each occasion
Even if I err and end up with confusion
I want only one word
Just keep your hand o, lord

I bow down
Of my own
To see the hand
That shall be ever on my head

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

I end up by saying “O lord, forgive me for anything”

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

5 RAMESH AGRAWAL6 minutes ago THANK YOU

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

good Ir- Relevant fka Ludy Bührs9 minutes ago well done Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

Thoughtful Timothy Blake9 minutes ago Well written, I like the old fashioned grammar. Well done!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

welcome niamh dada land

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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