On Living Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

On Living

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My dear brothers and fellows
What are you doing of you
What's between you and I
The secure border of present and past
We are living in one land
Above the death on black
You fit to seem too under
Where I live on your living.

I am no special than you
Still I am odd from you
You change, become strange
I change which I never want
Come let's come to a point
Where shall we sit on or in?
Being on you ought to return
Being in you are well very in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Divya Divya B 19 November 2011

good work keep it up10

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Divya Divya B 19 November 2011

good poem keep it up 10

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grame peele 17 November 2011

the text hits the power of living. a wish a despair and the way of moving words are lovely.

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lover of poetry sweet 09 November 2011

last four lines brings the charm of brotherhood and answer for first line.10+10+10

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